Group+F

Group F members are listed below:

Please click EDIT to enter in this page the agreed score for each trait **__(below).__** Start entering your information below the list of group members. Do not delete the names. Use the DISCUSSION area to discuss until you reach consensus. Click Save to save your changes.
 * Daniel Gilbert ||  ||
 * Jason Kushner ||  ||
 * Christine Ziemian ||

**//__6 + 1 Traits – IDEAS__//** · Cat/Dog - SCORE_ We would give a score of a 1 on the Cat/Dog paper. . The paper lacks clarity and the sentences repeat.

· Earth - SCORE_ We would give a score of a 3 on the Earth paper. The paper has clear ideas but these ideas need to be elaborated. The paper has many grammar errors and has wrong information about the Earth.

· Zeena - SCORE_ We would score a 5 on the Zeena paper. The paper has clarity. The paper hold's the reader's attention. The student writes from personal experience which makes the story original. The writer is descriptive and the paper flows well. 6 + 1 Traits – ORGANIZATION __//** · To be a good Techer - SCORE_ We would score a 1 on the To be a good teacher paper. The paper feels awkward and there are problems with organization. The paper lacks structure. There is no conclusion or introduction.
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· What are the Qualities of a Good Teacher? - SCORE_ We would score a 1 Aunt Leisa paper. The paper has many spelling and punctuation errors. The paper has many errors in grammar and lacks proper structure.

· A Good Teacher - SCORE_ We would score a 5 What Are the Qualities of a Good Teacher a paper. The paper has a few errors in spelling and grammar. The paper is structured well and easy to understand. 6 + 1 Traits – VOICE __//** · A Day as a Rain Drop - SCORE_ We would score A Day as a Rain Drop a 5. We find the tone of the writing adds interest to the message. · One Day I Was Riding - SCORE_We would score One Day I was Riding a 1. The writing is very lifeless and mechanical. The piece is very "risk-free." · Frogs - SCORE_We would score Frogs a 3. The writer seems aware of an audience but discards personal insights in favor of obvious generalities.
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­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­ · Mother is Nice - SCORE_ We would score Mother is Nice a 1 because of its repetative patterns and limited vocabulary. · My Most Rewarding Moment - SCORE_We would score My Rewarding Moment a 5. We believe this piece is well written with creative and thought out ideas that are interesting to the reader. · A & W - SCORE_ We would Score A&W a 5. We find this piece to be well written with good structure and an interesting hold throughout it's entirety.
 * //__ 6 + 1 Traits – WORD CHOICE __//**


 * //__ 6 + 1 Traits – SENTENCE FLUENCY __//**
 * · ** **Bud - SCORE 1 :** We all are in agreement that “Bud” deserves the score of 1. It has grammar and spelling errors throughout and feels awkward to read. Another problem is that the dialog needs to be in quotations. This paper needs a lot of word with sentence fluency.
 * · ** **Remembering Our Flag - SCORE 3 :** We think that “Remember our Flag” is an average paper and should be scored as average, 3. There is a lot of punctuation going on, which makes it hard to follow at times. The paper is also sort of choppy, which makes it even harder to follow along. It’s not bad, but there is a need for improvement.
 * · ** **All About Rabbits - SCORE 3 :** “All About Rabbits”, is also average, and we agree that a score of 3 is appropriate. We all pointed out the grammar and spelling errors. Having so many errors makes it hard to follow along. The paper doesn’t run smoothly and could use some improvement.


 * //__ 6 + 1 Traits – CONVENTIONS __//**
 * · ** **Remembering Our Flag 3 :** “Remembering Our Flag” is in need of improvement. It contains many grammar and spelling mistakes and could use some editing. The paper is still average, it could be good with the proper corrections, but we agree it deserves a score of 3.
 * · ** **Aunt Leisa 1 :** “Aunt Leisa” needs the score of 1. It has many spelling errors, too many to keep track of. Punctuation is also poor, and the lack of quotes in dialog is not acceptable. There is a lot of room for improvement in this paper.
 * · ** **What are the Qualities of a Good Teacher? 5 :** We all scored “What are the Qualities of a Good Teacher” very high. We think it deserves a 5 because it’s structured very well and has good and consistent spelling and grammar throughout. The good spelling and grammar makes it easy for the reader to follow.

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